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One step closer to the edge. by ~shinerain:iconshinerain:


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It's finnished. Somehow ^^; First i made the girl. Then i decided about the background..they don't blend. Anyone knows how to fix that? Thanks.
Oh. And the hair is black. I swear. And i like the moon.

Well, :iconmaru-chany:, i hope you like it. Si apropo, Paste fericit! :hug:

Character (c) :iconmaru-chany:
Art by me.
Download for fullview. More details there xD

And ignore the bag. :|
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I like what you titled it.
I love that song by Linkin Park ^.^

Very beatiful picture :clap: I love it!

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:butterflytwo: One half of the world cannot understand the pleasures of the other :butterflytwo:
Nyaaa~ Uite ca imi place cum a iesit ^__^ Thaaaank you very much. Si ea stand pe marginea unei cladiri...is so like her XD Parul imi place cum a iesit, pentru ca pare foarte lucios si lung si des :3 Si pielea arata destul de bine :D

So, am sa reiau si eu lucrul si meet ya later >:3

Oh, si sa ai parte de mancare si de bautura pana te saturi! Paste Fericit :hug:

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This is very nice. I think the reason the two don't blend is because you don't have any shadows... like under the girl along the place where she is sitting. The wall where her hands are supposed to be resting doesn't seem to be there. She is sitting on an edge that you can see but then the side where her hands are seems to just be a line. This kind of makes it look flat and like she is just dangling there... the rest is great, but those little things might help you to give it a little more depth and blend the two together. Also a little shadow on her clothes on the side not facing the moon will add more depth. She is a little bright for the dark back ground.

That being said... you are better than I am because I can't draw at all ;) Usually I would not offer tips on stuff like this, but you are having the same issues I did with my manips so I figure it can't hurt to pass on the advice I was given. I think you did really well and if you add a few extra touches to it you will be all set. I hope that helps. If it makes no sense, send me a note and I can doodle on your piece to show you what I mean.

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Linkin Park is my favourite band :heart:
Thank you! :hug:

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super !!!!!!!!!

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getting away with it, all messed up...
thankie :)

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:hug: Your welcome

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:butterflytwo: One half of the world cannot understand the pleasures of the other :butterflytwo:
Ma bucur! :hug: Paste fericit! Hristos a inviat! ^^

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Nu se potriveste pentru ca ai 2 perspective dierite pt fata si pt zid (adik fata sta un pic intr-o parte si mai are un pic si cade) - in al doilea rand sunt de acord cu pers de mai sus care a zis de lipsa umbrelor.

Astea fiind zise - si mie imi place enorm parul, dar parerea mea e ca ai pus prea mult luciu pentur o scena nocturna :P (si vezi ca ar trebui totusi sa-l concentrezi pe diorectia luminii - nu sa fie la fel peste tot ;) )

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